STORY TIME PEOPLE
The Rules of the Storytelling Challenge
Read the previous chapter, add your own continuation, nominate the next blogger, and link them up so the story can keep rolling!
No overthinking and not resetting the story. Just pick up where the last blogger left off and let your imagination take over.
Now letโs dive in, shall we?
Wellโฆwhat have we here. A story telling challenge.And I have been passed on the baton to continue from where it was left off…..
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The Story So Farโฆ
New to Apartment 4402? Catch up on the madness before you step inside!
Chapter 1: Savio introduces us to Apartment 4402
Chapter 2: Rajeshwari turns an ordinary housewarming into something rather mysterious.
Chapter 3: Lalitha takes the mystery to a whole new level.
Chapter 4: Sri tries to solve the Stranger in Apartment 4402: The Arjun Problem
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Chapter 5
Previously in Apartment 4402โฆ
Two Arjun’s. One haunted flat. A shower with commitment issues. And a property broker who could probably sell a flat to its own ghost.
Honestly, even the ghosts deserved better housing.
โBoth?โ Arjun stared at Jamshed. โYou mean I have to pay maintenance for a man who died forty years ago?โ
The stranger looked offended. โExcuse me! I may be dead, but I have standards. And the lift has been out of order since 1986.โ
โTHE BUILDING WASNโT EVEN BUILT THEN!โ Arjun screamed.
โExactly. Terrible construction quality.โ
Before anyone could respond, the lights flickered.
The television switched on by itself.
A newsreader appeared on the screen.
BREAKING NEWS: A MAN HAS BEEN REPORTED MISSING FROM APARTMENT 4402.
Everyone turned towards Arjun.
Then towards the stranger.
Then back towards Arjun.
โWhich one of us is missing?โ Arjun whispered.
Kabir shook his head. โAt this point, Iโm missing my old, peaceful life.โ
Suddenly, Rhea’s phone rang.
Unknown Number.
She answered on speaker.
A woman’s trembling voice whispered, โIs Arjun there?โ
โWhich Arjun?โ Rhea asked nervously.
A pause.
Then the voice replied, โThe one who hasn’t been born yet.โ
The call disconnected.
Nobody breathed.
Even Jamshed stopped smiling. For approximately two seconds.
Then he adjusted his collar. โSmall technical issue, madam. Happens in premium properties.โ
โJAMSHED!โ everyone shouted.
Just then, the lift bell rang outside.
Ding!
The apartment door slowly opened by itself.
A little girl stood in the doorway, holding a red balloon.
She looked straight at the two Arjun’s.
โPapa?โ she asked.
Both men pointed at each other.
The girl sighed. โOh no. Not again.โ
She walked inside, placed the balloon on the dining table, and turned towards the curtains.
โUncle,โ she whispered, โwhy have you opened the window?โ
Arjun frowned. โWhich uncle?โ
The girl pointed at the curtains.
They were moving.
But every window in the apartment was firmly shut.
Then, from behind the cornflower-blue fabric, came a third voice.
โBecause,โ it said cheerfully, โsomeone has to let me in.โ
The curtains flew open.
There was no window behind them.
Only a narrow staircase descending into complete darkness.
And on the first step lay a photograph.
Seven friends.
One little girl.
Two identical Arjun’s.
And a shadow standing behind them all.
The photograph was dated November 1, 2026.
Tomorrow’s date.
Kabir swallowed hard.
โRight,โ he announced. โI’m moving out.โ
The little girl looked at him sadly.
โYou can’t.โ
โWHY NOT?โ
She pointed towards the front door.
A new brass nameplate had appeared.
APARTMENT 4402 โ OCCUPANTS: 10
Rhea counted the people in the room.
One, two, threeโฆ
Her face turned pale.
โGuys,โ she whispered, โthere are only nine of us.โ
From somewhere beneath the staircase came a familiar, gravelly laugh.
โArre, darwaza toh kholo, yaar!โ
(Come on, open the door!)
And then the little girl smiled.
โThat’s the original Arjun,โ she said.
Both Arjun’s screamed.
The lights went out.
TO BE CONTINUEDโฆ ๐ป
P.S. If anyone knows a good property lawyer who handles disputes between the living, the dead, and the not-yet-born, please send me their number. Jamshed is clearly not to be trusted. ๐
And now comes the most dangerous part of this exercise: passing the baton.
I have someone in mind who I think can bring just right amount of madness,spooky and humorous to this already questionable apartment.
Witsutra.wordpress.com of Wise Foolz, are you ready to enter Apartment 4402?
I’m passing the baton to you.
We all cannot wait to see what you can do with this. Please feel free to make things more ridiculous. The floor is yours take the story where ever your imagination leads you too.

13 responses to “ Chapter 5 Apartment 4402 โ The Rent Is Due, But to WHOM? ๐ป๐”
Oh yes, FoolZ cannot be “more” ready :p I am going to shoot him a nudge and let him read and get ready for the next step
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Yes Dear, I have already messaged him
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…great job! Did anyone read the sale deed correctly? Oh wait! Did Arjun go through it before signing it?
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Hahaha ๐คฃ Looks like Arjun skipped the fine print and landed himself in a 40-year-old property dispute! Perhaps the ghosts were hiding in the terms and conditions. Next time, he’ll need a lawyer, an exorcist and a very careful reading of the sale deed. ๐ป๐
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Great ๐. I knew ,friend you will do wonders to this story.
Enjoyed reading chapter 6๐
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Behen! Yeh kya tha?? ๐ฑGolmaal hai bhai sab golmaal hai. Unborn people ki news phatak se phone pe bhi? Arrey wah! Chalo Pregnancy kit ke paise bach gaye.
Yeh Arjun saala bura phasa. Pata nai kya phoonkh ke kharid li flat. Flat na hua big fat musibath ka pahaad ho chala. And who the hell is this girl with a balloon? Bhoot Arjun with original curtain wala shirt ki beti?
Questions. Questions. Itne saare. Dimaag ki dhahi haandi ho gayi behen. Oye Screwala, ama zaara chai toh pilao yaaron!!
I am really liking Kabir at this point. He seems ready to jump on the sofa, makes sensible suggestions and even sounds gay. Perfectly my type of friend. Oye Kabir, niklo wahaan se! Jaldiiiii…
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Arrey, pakka dimaag ki dahi ho gayi hogi! ๐ Sahi pakde ho, yeh show twist pe twist de raha hai. Aur Kabir waakai scene stealer haiโuski entry ka wait karte hain, jaldi nikalne bolo warna woh bhi is madhouse mein phas jayega! โ๏ธ๐คช
But Lalitha you must read the next chapter by wizefool.
One more ๐ชข twist.๐๐๐
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Hey Bhagwaan! Ek aur twist. “Aao twist kare” bajh rahi thi shayad 40 yrs ago when the curtain shirt wala bhootiya Arjun bought the house.. wait… He died 40 yrs ago, was it? Itna confusion. Its a mad mad house. Bechara mera Kabir! Haye๐ญ
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Yes, now it has become mad ๐ก๐
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Thank you, my friend, for passing the baton and giving me the opportunity to join this madness. Iโm glad to be part of this storytelling adventure. Apartment 4402 seems to have more occupants than it can handle, and now it has one more blogger to deal with. Letโs see what happens next! I have posted the continuation of the story today.
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Dear I have read your part of the story.
It was Great ๐๐
Another ๐ชข twist ๐ฎ
Let’s see what happens next
Egarly waiting.
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Thank you, my friend.
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