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     Chapter 5 Apartment 4402 โ€” The Rent Is Due, But to WHOM? ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ˜‚

STORY TIME PEOPLE

The Rules of the Storytelling Challenge

Read the previous chapter, add your own continuation, nominate the next blogger, and link them up so the story can keep rolling!

No overthinking and not resetting the story. Just pick up where the last blogger left off and let your imagination take over.

Now letโ€™s dive in, shall we?

Wellโ€ฆwhat have we here. A story telling challenge.And I have been passed on the baton to continue from where it was left off…..

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The Story So Farโ€ฆ

New to Apartment 4402? Catch up on the madness before you step inside!

Chapter 1: Savio introduces us to Apartment 4402


Chapter 2: Rajeshwari turns an ordinary housewarming into something rather mysterious.


Chapter 3: Lalitha takes the mystery to a whole new level.

Chapter 4: Sri tries to solve the Stranger in Apartment 4402: The Arjun Problem

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Chapter 5

Previously in Apartment 4402โ€ฆ

Two Arjun’s. One haunted flat. A shower with commitment issues. And a property broker who could probably sell a flat to its own ghost.

Honestly, even the ghosts deserved better housing.

โ€œBoth?โ€ Arjun stared at Jamshed. โ€œYou mean I have to pay maintenance for a man who died forty years ago?โ€

The stranger looked offended. โ€œExcuse me! I may be dead, but I have standards. And the lift has been out of order since 1986.โ€

โ€œTHE BUILDING WASNโ€™T EVEN BUILT THEN!โ€ Arjun screamed.

โ€œExactly. Terrible construction quality.โ€

Before anyone could respond, the lights flickered.

The television switched on by itself.

A newsreader appeared on the screen.

BREAKING NEWS: A MAN HAS BEEN REPORTED MISSING FROM APARTMENT 4402.

Everyone turned towards Arjun.

Then towards the stranger.

Then back towards Arjun.

โ€œWhich one of us is missing?โ€ Arjun whispered.

Kabir shook his head. โ€œAt this point, Iโ€™m missing my old, peaceful life.โ€

Suddenly, Rhea’s phone rang.

Unknown Number.

She answered on speaker.

A woman’s trembling voice whispered, โ€œIs Arjun there?โ€

โ€œWhich Arjun?โ€ Rhea asked nervously.

A pause.

Then the voice replied, โ€œThe one who hasn’t been born yet.โ€

The call disconnected.

Nobody breathed.

Even Jamshed stopped smiling. For approximately two seconds.

Then he adjusted his collar. โ€œSmall technical issue, madam. Happens in premium properties.โ€

โ€œJAMSHED!โ€ everyone shouted.

Just then, the lift bell rang outside.

Ding!

The apartment door slowly opened by itself.

A little girl stood in the doorway, holding a red balloon.

She looked straight at the two Arjun’s.

โ€œPapa?โ€ she asked.

Both men pointed at each other.

The girl sighed. โ€œOh no. Not again.โ€

She walked inside, placed the balloon on the dining table, and turned towards the curtains.

โ€œUncle,โ€ she whispered, โ€œwhy have you opened the window?โ€

Arjun frowned. โ€œWhich uncle?โ€

The girl pointed at the curtains.

They were moving.

But every window in the apartment was firmly shut.

Then, from behind the cornflower-blue fabric, came a third voice.

โ€œBecause,โ€ it said cheerfully, โ€œsomeone has to let me in.โ€

The curtains flew open.

There was no window behind them.

Only a narrow staircase descending into complete darkness.

And on the first step lay a photograph.

Seven friends.

One little girl.

Two identical Arjun’s.

And a shadow standing behind them all.

The photograph was dated November 1, 2026.

Tomorrow’s date.

Kabir swallowed hard.

โ€œRight,โ€ he announced. โ€œI’m moving out.โ€

The little girl looked at him sadly.

โ€œYou can’t.โ€

โ€œWHY NOT?โ€

She pointed towards the front door.

A new brass nameplate had appeared.

APARTMENT 4402 โ€” OCCUPANTS: 10

Rhea counted the people in the room.

One, two, threeโ€ฆ

Her face turned pale.

โ€œGuys,โ€ she whispered, โ€œthere are only nine of us.โ€

From somewhere beneath the staircase came a familiar, gravelly laugh.

โ€œArre, darwaza toh kholo, yaar!โ€

(Come on, open the door!)

And then the little girl smiled.

โ€œThat’s the original Arjun,โ€ she said.

Both Arjun’s screamed.

The lights went out.

TO BE CONTINUEDโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ‘ป

P.S. If anyone knows a good property lawyer who handles disputes between the living, the dead, and the not-yet-born, please send me their number. Jamshed is clearly not to be trusted. ๐Ÿ˜‚


And now comes the most dangerous part of this exercise: passing the baton.

I have someone in mind who I think can bring just right amount of madness,spooky and humorous to this already questionable apartment.

Witsutra.wordpress.com of Wise Foolz, are you ready to enter Apartment 4402?
I’m passing the baton to you.

We all cannot wait to see what you can do with this. Please feel free to make things more ridiculous. The floor is yours take the story where ever your imagination leads you too.

13 responses to “     Chapter 5 Apartment 4402 โ€” The Rent Is Due, But to WHOM? ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ˜‚”

    • Hahaha ๐Ÿคฃ Looks like Arjun skipped the fine print and landed himself in a 40-year-old property dispute! Perhaps the ghosts were hiding in the terms and conditions. Next time, he’ll need a lawyer, an exorcist and a very careful reading of the sale deed. ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ˜„

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  1. Behen! Yeh kya tha?? ๐Ÿ˜ฑGolmaal hai bhai sab golmaal hai. Unborn people ki news phatak se phone pe bhi? Arrey wah! Chalo Pregnancy kit ke paise bach gaye.

    Yeh Arjun saala bura phasa. Pata nai kya phoonkh ke kharid li flat. Flat na hua big fat musibath ka pahaad ho chala. And who the hell is this girl with a balloon? Bhoot Arjun with original curtain wala shirt ki beti?

    Questions. Questions. Itne saare. Dimaag ki dhahi haandi ho gayi behen. Oye Screwala, ama zaara chai toh pilao yaaron!!

    I am really liking Kabir at this point. He seems ready to jump on the sofa, makes sensible suggestions and even sounds gay. Perfectly my type of friend. Oye Kabir, niklo wahaan se! Jaldiiiii…

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    • Arrey, pakka dimaag ki dahi ho gayi hogi! ๐Ÿ˜‚ Sahi pakde ho, yeh show twist pe twist de raha hai. Aur Kabir waakai scene stealer haiโ€”uski entry ka wait karte hain, jaldi nikalne bolo warna woh bhi is madhouse mein phas jayega! โ˜•๏ธ๐Ÿคช

      But Lalitha you must read the next chapter by wizefool.
      One more ๐Ÿชข twist.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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  2. Thank you, my friend, for passing the baton and giving me the opportunity to join this madness. Iโ€™m glad to be part of this storytelling adventure. Apartment 4402 seems to have more occupants than it can handle, and now it has one more blogger to deal with. Letโ€™s see what happens next! I have posted the continuation of the story today.

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